Friday, May 3, 2013

Dramatic

Mellow Soulmate AU.  Maedhros returns after rebirth, and he's not the man his wife remembers.  Quenya names used, so Maedhros = Maitimo.  Istelindë is my OFC who is Maedhros' wife in my head-canon, so if you don't want a story from an OC POV, this ain't your cup of tea.  Anyway, just a little something inspired by the phrase "dramatic change".  Connected to "Broken" and "Weapon" vaguely because of characters and pairing, but not in a chronological story-line.  Takes place in late Second Age in Valinor.

Disclaimer: Tolkien owns the Silmarillion.  Istelindë is mine.

Pairings: Maedhros x Istelindë

Characters: Istelindë, Maedhros (seriously doesn't even really mention anyone else but random elves on the street)

Warning: canon-compliant probable AU, OFC, mentions war, torture, mutilation and alludes to murder

Song: Starfall

Words: 843
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dramatic (adjective): suitable to or characteristic of the drama; striking in appearance or effect

At first, she barely recognized him.

He was still taller than any man she had ever met, back erect and head held high with pride, towering over the crowds even as they parted about him, as though some evil stench or disfiguring disease physically riddled his form.  He was still crowned in luxurious russet locks, long and curling in thick, silken waves around broad shoulders and over the rippling muscles of his bared arms.  To her he came upon the street in a blue tunic, unadorned as a common merchant with nothing to his name but the clothes upon his back and the boots upon his feet.

Still, he was the most beautiful man she had ever laid eye upon.

But he was at the same all too different.

She first noticed it when he reached her side and knelt in the middle of the street with his head bowed, first noticed when his hand rose to grasp hers, only the left, bare of the wedding band that had once adorned his fourth finger.  His lips brushed her knuckles in the gesture of a dashing prince, but she could see that he was weeping openly, narrow cheekbones glistening in the fading evening daylight as he laid his forehead to her cool skin.

"My sweet Istelindë," he rasped, and his voice was low and unfamiliar, gravelly where it had once been dark chocolate and velvet.  It was now strained, heavy with an unnamed weight.

His right arm rose, and she nearly recoiled at the disturbingly handless stump revealed to her gaze, the knob of his wrist jutting awkwardly from scarred, twisted flesh, permanently aching pink with raised marks and painted with blanched, jagged edges writhing over fair skin.

But the physical mutilation was nothing in comparison to her first true glimpse of his face, her first true glimpse of the dramatic change wrought through misadventure and suffering.

For that face that had so long had haunted her dreams and waking hours was nearly unrecognizable.  Once, she had known it as she knew the back of her own hands, every curve and dip and angle of his regal cheekbones and straight nose and cleft chin burned into her mind as a vivid, eternal image.  In their younger years beneath the golden and silver lights, he had been the most handsome and glorious of men--Maitimo, his mother named him, and he was perfect in face and form.  His face had been narrow, but full with healthy flushed skin and dimples at the corners of his grinning lips.

He was not smiling now.  Instead of dimples, there were deep lines etched into skin once smooth and flawless, circling the corners of the downturned bow of mouth and digging deep trenches beneath his steel-gray eyes.  Between slender brows, a deep furrow reflected countless years of anger and an equal burden of sorrow.

Once brilliant eyes were faded and dark like ash, the silver stars she had once been so fond of gazing upon now shielded with a fog of destruction, smoke rising from the corpse of the man she had once loved so dearly, charred and melted away beneath the vicious heat of sin and betrayal.  That man had been ravaged by unspoken horrors which she for all her worldliness could not even begin to imagine or understand.  Hollow and filled with ghosts, those darkened orbs were ringed in bruised circles from nights filled to the brim with guilty thoughts and echoing screams.

But even so, a small flicker of the fire she so loved remained, licking at the back walls of grief like a glimpse of redemption.  Somehow, the spirit beneath the battlefield of scars still smoldered, fighting against the treacherous downpour to awaken, to burst back into life.

"My handsome Maitimo," she responded softly, her voice low, her hand rising from his grasp to cup a gaunt cheek and stroke over sickly gray flesh. "I missed you so, my husband."

At her gently spoken words, helplessly, his lips twitched into a crooked grin, a pale shadow of the roguish expression that had first seduced her in the blissful years of maidenhood and naivety.  But for all the washed-out glory, his sight still caught her breath in her throat, still stirred her heart into a beating frenzy, still left her breathless at the sight of the wonder in his eyes, the familiar hiding beneath this war-torn stranger with her husband's height and red curls.

For all the dramatic change, he was still her Maitimo, her mate.  Her One.  And no amount of sorrow could destroy the soft fire seared down to his core.  No amount of suffering could unmake the other half of her soul or rend their bond apart at the seams.  Each tenuous thread held strong and true.  Though she could see the doubt in those eyes--the fear in that heart--it was unfounded.

She welcomed into her embrace and laid his head upon her breast.  And she forgave.
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Very short and sweet.  In all honestly, until about an hour ago I had no idea what I was even going to write for this prompt.  I've been busy all day.  Performances with my pet vocalists and going places and watching movies.  I'm so distracted.  But anyway, here we have a first glimpse into the mind of Istelindë.  I have never written from her perspective before, so this is a first for me.  Forgive me for focusing so much on an OFC; some people don't like that, but I couldn't help myself.

Listening to Starfall by Two Steps From Hell.  Amazing song (though the people who leave really random story-board ideas in the comments section need to learn to be less cliche) and I've loved it for at least a year and a half now, if not longer.  It was, like, the second TSFH song I ever discovered and I immediately found it enchanting.

For fun: Maedhros the Tall by ~Ilweran in dA in the same style as the Fingon in "Terrible".  For some reason I find these words to be rather interesting from an artistic standpoint.  Not sure why, but I like them.

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