Tuesday, January 14, 2014

Trouble

Mellow Soulmate AU.  We’re going to call this the Rhythm Arc.  Anyway.  Írimë does not know as much about her oldest sibling as she would like to believe.  Or about her sister-in-law.  This is closely related to “Test”, “Whitewash” and “Mistakes”, basically serving as a prelude to the last but happens after both of the others.  This is a character origin story, but also a look into misogynism and feminism in Tolkien’s works based entirely off my interpretation of elven society as being antiquated and patriarchal.  Feel free to be more idealistic.  Takes place in Tirion during the Years of the Trees.

Disclaimer: I don’t own the Silmarillion.  Or either of Írimë’s children.  Btw: Írimë = Lalwen

Pairings: OMC x Lalwen, Fëanor x Nerdanel

Characters: Lalwen, Fëanor, Ecthelion (mentions Aranwë, Finwë, Indis, Findis, Fingolfin, Finarfin, Maedhros, Nerdanel and other grandchildren of Finwë)

Warning: technically canon-compliant AU, misogynist tendencies, feminist undertones, unplanned pregnancy, premarital sex, royalty, scandal and political maneuvering, cover-ups, legitimacy issues, Fëanor being strange

Song: Forbidden Love (in no way a reference to a pairing)

Words: 2,106
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trouble (noun): the quality or state of being troubled especially mentally; public unrest or disturbance; a state or condition of distress, annoyance or difficulty; a cause of distress, annoyance or inconvenience

Trouble.

That was the word they whispered behind her back.  The word that meant ruin.  The word that meant scandal.

The word that meant her life was unraveling at the seams.

Lalwen was no foolish young maiden.  She knew that those who chose to observe could see it as plainly as they could see the sky and the grass and the mountains and the rivers.  Even the loosest of her gowns covered with the most voluminous of robes could not hide the roundness now growing at her center.  And even were the physical indicators not enough, her trips to the bathroom each morning like clockwork would spread word amongst the servants, whose gossip would be like flame unto dry wood.

Everyone would know.  Everyone must know.

Whispers began to flow like good wine tainted with poison and sweet music with a single discordant voice.  Everywhere she turned, she sensed the eyes watching and waiting for her to make a mistake.  For her to reveal her shame.

Her trouble.

For it was trouble.  Lalwen wondered if she had been too brave—too foolhardy and careless—with her liaison.  She had not tried to conceive a child either of love or vindictive bitterness, but neither had she gone out of her way to avoid conception.  Recklessly, she had thrown aside all thoughts in the heat of the moment and allowed herself the freedom she so often had craved since the long days of whitewashed lies had begun to eat away at the murals of her mind.

It had been a statement then.  Disobedience.  A way to spit in her parents’ faces for their callous treatment of their illegitimate grandchild.  A way to make them sorry without ever needing to breathe a word of the untruths that had destroyed her heart and wild spirit.

My spirit is not tamed!  That was what her actions had screamed.  Think you truly that you can control me?  That you can hold me hostage and bend me to your will?  That you may decide the fate of my son and I will stand back and watch demurely as you deny him his birthright?

But this was farther than she had intended to go.

And it was only a matter of time.

A matter of time before her father demanded the truth.  Before he disowned her and stripped her of her status and left her helpless.  Before the rumors would become facts and the facts would become concrete and the true ostracism would begin.

Part of her wondered what would happen to her now—to her and her young son and her unborn baby.  Her reputation was transferred automatically upon the shoulders of her children.  Would they be shunned, thrown out of the palace and left to wander the city like beggars until Lalwen found a patron who would take a loose woman into his or her employ?  Would they starve, because she could sell her jewelry and her expensive clothing and even her skills should it be necessary, but eventually even those vices would run dry?

It was not often that she agreed with anything the wily bastards and prissy peahens of court hissed behind fluttering fans and beyond closed doors.  But this… this…

This was trouble.  Real trouble.

And she knew her father saw by the strained look that glazed gray eyes normally so soft and tender.  She knew her mother saw by the tremble of the lower lip and the shattered blue eyes.  She knew even that her siblings saw, for Findis turned up her nose and Nolofinwë averted his eyes and Arafinwë pretended at oblivion.

Even Fëanáro must have known.  Must have seen.

Yes, it was only a matter of time.  And she did not know what she would do when that time came.

For now, she could only hide in the darkened corners of the palace and soothingly stroke the swell of unborn child, hoping that her turmoil was not reflected upon his young and innocent spirit where it rested in her womb.  More than anything, she would have liked to give this baby the life she could not give Aranwë, the life that she could not even give herself, without all of this political scandal and the weight of a thousand eyes bearing down upon their backs.

“Why can life not be simple, I wonder,” she whispered. “My sweet baby, what I would not give…”

“So it is true, then.”

Barely did she restrain her gasp, catching it heavily upon the rise of her tongue and against the wall of her closed lips.  Slowly did she let her gaze rise from the place where her hands rested upon her child, up and up and up toward another figure half-hidden in the shadows.  Another figure with eyes that could have lit their own skies for their intense resplendence.

He was the last person she would have expected to see.

“Your Highness,” she whispered with a bowed head, neither acknowledging or dismissing his claim. “What can I do for you?”

“Tell me the truth,” he said.  His voice, at least, was not harsh or sharp.  It was frightfully soothing, raw silk and velvet, and immediately Lalwen was put on edge.  Never was Fëanáro charming for no reason.  There must be something…

She licked her suddenly dry lips. “You already know the answer,” she replied as calmly as she could manage.  Her voice still quivered.  “Why would you want to hear it again?”

“Because I do not want to hear it from the lips of my backstabbing courtiers.”  Too close did he draw, near enough to touch.  Near enough that she could feel his heat through the layers of her clothes.  Near enough that she could see how his normally razor-edged smile was rather dull and drawn.  The tilt of his head was wrong, and the stance of his body was different—where were the challenging thrust of broad shoulders and the condescending angle of that glorious face?

It was wrong.  Strange.

What do you want, I wonder…

“I am with child.” The admittance was harder to grind out than she had expected.  And it left her feeling naked and vulnerable before a predator, a man she knew could pick her apart with villainous delight and would feel no remorse in the ravaging. “But you already knew.”

“Of course I knew.”  And, for once, he did not sound arrogantly pleased with himself. “My wife has been with child enough times that I recognize the signs.  I may be a man, but I am no dullard.”

Of course, with four children now and a fifth on the way, Fëanáro would see the signs with clarity.  Lalwen would not have been surprised if he had known before she had known.

But why, then, would he say nothing?

Normally, he took great pleasure in bringing low those who laid bare their secrets.  Never one for compassion, he tore them apart like a vulture gorging its hunger upon a corpse, eagerly consuming them until nothing was left but bones and he—the predator—was purring in contended sadism.  It was, she had learned young, simply the way of the strange and paradoxical Crown Prince, who could be so gentle and loving one moment and, without so much as batting an eyelash in shame, be so terrifying and heartless the next.

“You know,” he began, “You are not the only woman to have ever faced such a situation.”

“Do I know?” she asked, raising a brow to hide her anxiety and growing fear.  Women at court who became with child out of wedlock were taken away to the country, hidden beneath the shadows of their many relatives.  Later, they might appear again, childless and with nothing to show for their extended stay upon the green expanses of Valinor but for a smile more wane and many conversations more dull.

Of course, it was rarely proven or acknowledged.  She could, if the father consented, always marry to keep the child in wedlock.  Then, they need only a few extra months to…

To… cover it up…

She understood.

“Nerdanel.”  Somehow, it did not surprise her as much as it should have. “Little Nelyafinwë?”

Well could she see that image in her mind, of a young Nerdanel seduced with ease by Fëanáro’s persistence and unwittingly charming vehemence.  They—as she and her lovers had—would have lost themselves in the fire and the passion and the tangle of limbs slick with sweat.  In the aftermath, they would have cuddled and whispered soft words in the dark, basking in the warmth of another body and mind and soul so close to their own, as at one and whole.

And then morning would come and bring all its troubles to bear.

“Do not misinterpret,” the Crown Prince said quickly, frown lining the sides of his mouth and furrowing his brows. “I love my wife, and I had intended to marry her from the beginning, else I would not have courted her as I did.  But we were foolish.  I had not even asked her father for her hand when the first signs appeared.”

And Lalwen knew the rest.  A swift engagement and marriage—at Fëanáro’s insistence—and a grand ceremony in which the groom and bride glowed equally bright and radiated happiness even through the damper of somber state proceedings.  Then Fëanáro had scooped up his giggling new wife had retreated to Formenos—to the country—and proclaimed that he wanted a year of respite from the hardships of prince-hood so that he might enjoy his time spent with their future queen.

It had seemed innocent, innocuous, and was meant to appear as such.  Well played.  Well played indeed.

“Are you good at slipping through the knots of trouble, your Highness?”

His smile was back.  Incisive and conceited as ever. “Very.”

“Ah.”

What more could she say to that?  Was he here to gloat?

“However, I am not nearly as cold-hearted as you think me, dear sister.”  He spoke as though he could read her mind.  The Crown Prince stepped even closer, and Lalwen was swallowed up in the swirl of silver-white eyes circled by dark lashes, almost hypnotizing. “I have a little… present, shall we say… as a gift of congratulations of my newest niece or nephew, of course.”

His hand upon her own was like being touched by open flame.  Shocked, she was, that it did not char her flesh down to the bone from just a mere moment’s brush!  But, somehow, the searing pain of heat did not come, and she felt his fingers curl around her own, pressing her fist tightly shut.  Icy cold metal—ornate edges and loops—dug into her palm beneath the pressure of his iron grip.

“What is this sup—?”

“Hush.” A finger stopped further words from departing her lips. “As I said, a gift.  I have more houses than I could ever need.  What harm will one less do?  It is just a little cottage in the rolling hills, neglected and left to gather dust, but I thought I ought to provide a proper gift for my darling younger sister and her children who carry the blood of my father in their veins.”

“Children…?”  Children, not child.  Plural.

“Both of them,” he replied matter-of-factly, his hand dropping away from her own.  “After all, with all this trouble you have caused this household and upheaval you have created within this family, no one else will bother.”

Cold were the words and vicious was the smile that played their counterpoint, but as Lalwen watched her half-brother walk away as though nothing had happened, she had to wonder…

The key rested there in her hand when her fingers blossomed open to reveal its glory.  And a glorious rose it proved to be.  Heavy and brass, it weighed down her arm and yet seemed to make her shoulders feel so much lighter.

Her father could frown.  Her mother could cry.  Her sister could scoff.  And her brothers could look the other way.

But at least someone saw.  At least someone cared.

Or, perhaps, Fëanáro only understood.

Maybe more than she suspected.  Yet, somehow, that was a comfort.

Silently, she pressed the key to her bosom with her left hand and stroked her unborn child again with her right.  Perhaps the life she desired for her son or daughter was not yet beyond her grasp.


Perhaps that little glimmer of hope was not yet lost.

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